Thursday, 23 February 2017

Script

Thriller Script- Torpidity

Josh Masterson- Connor Southwell
Javier Martinelli- Thor Forster




JOSH MASTERSON seen overlooking Norwich, hood up. This cuts to JOSH MASTERSON standing under a lamppost, frantically checking his phone.

JOSH MASTERSON seen asleep at a bus stop after a frantic walking sequence, cut in focus’ on JAVIER MARTINELLI, JOSH MASTERSON then receives a text reading ‘I see you Josh but you don’t see me’.

JOSH MASTERSON turns around to where JAVIER MARTINELLI was standing, and nobody is there. JOSH MASTERSON breathes heavy and begins to run.

JAVIER MARTINELLI chases JOSH MASTERSON down an alley, dead end, JAVIER MARTINELLI seen walking towards him. As he reaches him, he swings to punch before a large intake of breath for JOSH MASTERSON before the screen goes black and we cut to JOSH MASTERSON sitting upright in bed before he receives the same text as previously.

Ends.


By Connor Southwell


1 comment:

  1. Some good ideas, but be careful... I don't want you to create an opening which simply consists of lots of people walking about. Remember you need to grab the audience's attention!

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