Thriller Script- Torpidity
Josh Masterson- Connor Southwell
Javier Martinelli- Thor Forster
JOSH MASTERSON seen overlooking Norwich, hood up. This cuts to JOSH
MASTERSON standing under a lamppost, frantically checking his phone.
JOSH MASTERSON seen asleep at a bus stop after a frantic walking sequence, cut
in focus’ on JAVIER MARTINELLI, JOSH MASTERSON then receives a text reading ‘I
see you Josh but you don’t see me’.
JOSH MASTERSON turns around to where JAVIER MARTINELLI was standing, and nobody
is there. JOSH MASTERSON breathes heavy and begins to run.
JAVIER MARTINELLI chases JOSH MASTERSON down an alley, dead end, JAVIER
MARTINELLI seen walking towards him. As he reaches him, he swings to punch
before a large intake of breath for JOSH MASTERSON before the screen goes black
and we cut to JOSH MASTERSON sitting upright in bed before he receives the same
text as previously.
Ends.
By Connor Southwell
Some good ideas, but be careful... I don't want you to create an opening which simply consists of lots of people walking about. Remember you need to grab the audience's attention!
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